We felt there was too much graphic detail in the first draft, and thus asked the writer to dial it down.

Since this breakup was even more public than the last and he's been especially asshattish about it, […]

, II.5.1.v: Bruel prescribes an epitheme for the heart, of bugloss, borage, water-lily, violet waters, sweet wine, balm leaves, nutmegs, cloves, etc.

Honey is the oldest of sweetenings.