For God is holde a ryghtwys man.
'slightly' feels unnecessary, and breaks the feel of 'tense and quivering'. You can post-adverbify if you like, but I'd still choose a different adverb to go after 'quivering', I think.
After initial successes , his tactical mistakes forced him to retreat to Kinmen and Siamen in southern Fujian. The following year, Cing forces launched new attacks on Kinmen and Siamen.[…] Jheng Jing abandons Kinmen and Siamen.
I was standing, one glorious Autumn morning, looking now up to where the crown of the Fall [Horseshoe Falls of the Niagara Falls], illuminated by the early sun, shone like opal, […] I was suddenly roused from a reverie by a sharp voice: It's a-bilin' and a-sizzling down there fust-rate!
It's a-bilin' and a-sizzling down there fust-rate!
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