Thirdly (and this is what seems so simple, yet is the most difficult) need to create a human story, smthng about which you can’t say: and then Sacha fell in love with Boria, and so forth.[…]in Benoît’s village, and finish either by their leaving (but that would be too good to be true) or by smthng that shows the friendship between Jean-Marie / Hubert (first I had thought: love scene Jean-Marie & Brigitte, then feared it would be too banal).