a falcon, towering in her pride of place

Somehow, even I got sucked into this strange K-pop universe. Sure, the quality of the music is sometimes debatable.

The vintner gathered bunches of grapes.

When in doubt, overpunctuate. Punctuation is important in all types of writing, but it is mandatory in international documents. Without punctuation, the probability of the evaluator getting lost increases dramatically. Overpunctuate international proposals, even though the trend is to under punctuate in domestic correspondence. The intent of punctuation is to add clarity, so make sure your overpunctuation is correct.