This got him mad so he yelled something unnice to her, and this got the big guy mad and he said something unnice to Marvin […]

This sounds like an AP English class, but in fact, the online community of fan fiction writers are willing to beta-read and be mentors, giving constructive feedback.

Like as a father pitieth his children, so the Lord pitieth them that fear him.

Yes, Juve were unfortunate, in the extreme, with the deflected goal from Casemiro that gave Madrid a 2-1 lead just after the hour. From that point onwards, however, it was staggering to see a team renowned for defensive structure crumple this way.